The experiment is clearly in the
form , a file of the FBI. The speaker seems to want to confess to murders for
“justice” and the sake of the families of those he murdered. I think this is
curious because he does not mention their names. I think it would be
interesting if he refused to give them names because of his lack of respect for
them, but he still refuses to give them any individual identification. I think
most people with this requirement to enforce morality are usually very
holier-than-though, self-righteous types, which I don’t see here much. He just
seems nervous, which makes me wonder how premeditated the murders were. They
seem like he was prepared for them mentally, he knew what he was going to do,
but he didn’t physically prepare for them, as he stored at least of the bodies
in a shed. Sans hands, apparently, which is I think something you could play
with in regards to the title. I almost want him to say he placed them in some
strange place or position—like on a scale, and start laughing. I want to see
him snap, or at least exclaim some of the dialogue on the second-to-last page.
The one thing that really, bothers me though is the ending. It seems like a new
beginning and there’s just so much
there that is completely ignored. I want to hear what he thinks, what drove him
to this.
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